Harry Potter’s Death Authority

Ellie almost sacrifices her life for the MC and confesess . Stil he dosent like her this is shit

the idea was good at the beginning, until the author started mixing chinese things into the story, and bruh why the heck is the mc is overpowered since day 1, wtf even dumbeledore and voldemort are afraid of him? and that's the just the beginning of the story, and why would he even force a useless thing as him going to disney or something and it took like 20chapters for something that couldve ended in 2 chapters lol, and like he could erase anyone memory but they don't even suspect about them doing nothing for an hour or why they couldn't remember what happenened in that hour, and the thing that made me quit this fan-fic is the mc has a thing from his original world, that shouldn't been found in the harry potter world, but voldemort knows about it? like come OOOOOOOOOON. anyways, i just wanted to write this so the readers that wants to read it, can have a solid idea about it.

YOU, have my thanks